Polished piece #8

Step One:  Re-Read ALL Your Five-Minute Writings


Select ONE piece that you can expand to at least a HALF PAGE writing.

Remember that it needs to be NARRATIVE or DESCRIPTIVE.  



Step Two:  Annotate Your Selected Five-Minute Writing Using All of the Following:

What do I like?

What are some words that I like?

Is there a sentence or a phrase that I like?

Where can I add sentences to make this a stronger piece?

Are there writing crimes?  If so, eliminate them!

Can this piece of writing be developed into a solid essay?  Why or why not?
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Step Three:  Spend 10-15 minutes polishing the five-minute writing you selected.





Step Four:  Upload Your Polished Piece to the Polished Piece Folder in Dropbox.  Include Your


Name, Date, and Polished Piece #8.